Post by thenecromacerofcha on May 25, 2011 15:46:45 GMT -5
Seth says:
This right here is an example of really, really bad writing. More importantly, it's a sign of a lack of respect and reading capabilities. This child also called my co-admin a bitch and was rude to her over chat, and if you think that I will accept anyone after that, even if they are published authors--and I know at least one published author, by the way, and she is fantastic--they are dead wrong.
Notice the lack of spaces after punctuation? Also the very, extremely short portions for personality and history, since the character lacks them both, much like the person who wrote it.
The dual parts of the reverie that were her origin--mary suedom, to a tea. And then there's the fact that she called her species a goddamned dreamer, which makes it perfectly clear that she didn't read the fucking rules. Thank you. Don't even try this way.
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Abagail
“Darkness resides in every soul,but when somone actaly releases there stupid pointless feelings for good,and gives in to there dark desires then I ask you
How do you feel now since you gave yourself to the darkness?”
This right here is an example of really, really bad writing. More importantly, it's a sign of a lack of respect and reading capabilities. This child also called my co-admin a bitch and was rude to her over chat, and if you think that I will accept anyone after that, even if they are published authors--and I know at least one published author, by the way, and she is fantastic--they are dead wrong.
Notice the lack of spaces after punctuation? Also the very, extremely short portions for personality and history, since the character lacks them both, much like the person who wrote it.
The dual parts of the reverie that were her origin--mary suedom, to a tea. And then there's the fact that she called her species a goddamned dreamer, which makes it perfectly clear that she didn't read the fucking rules. Thank you. Don't even try this way.
NAME:Call me by my chars name Abagail,because that is my real name also.
GENDER:Female
AGE:19.
ROLEPLAY EXPERIENCE: 4 years of being trained in very detailed posts.
OTHER CHARACTERS: N/A
HOW YOU FOUND US: Somone found me and got me here.
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Your image Max width 350, max height 290
Abagail
“Darkness resides in every soul,but when somone actaly releases there stupid pointless feelings for good,and gives in to there dark desires then I ask you
How do you feel now since you gave yourself to the darkness?”
NICKNAMES: Character Nicknames
GROUP: Dreamer.
AGE: 2340 years.
BIRTHDAY: September,19
SPECIES:Demoness
ORIGIN:Fantasy,nightmare.
GENDER: Female.
PLAY-BY:N/A
She stands about 5'10 weighing around 120 pounds her eyes are pure red from being a demonss,her hair is raven black and goes down to her shoulder blades,she is slightly thin and skiny,her muscles are slightly riped showing she does work out but she is frail enough when it comes to combat she is a magic user so she relies on magic more then brute force.Her skin is lightly dark showing a latino shade this is her nationality,her breasts are large enough around a D cup with a band with of 32,if she even wore a bra,she wears usaly a light transparent cloth around her neck that is somwhat tied on her back to keep her breasts covered abit the cloth hides them fully as everything else on her top is showing includeing her back,as her bottom wear consits of a loose transparent skirt that folds neatly around her hips the skirt ends right above her knees and has a slit on the left leg that shows that leg fully each time she takes a step,she wears a black thong from the looks of it,down lower she wears a pair of hard leather shoes and for gloves she wears hard leather fingerless gloves for an easy grip on a staff or spear.
She is calm,she loves to get straight to the point and does not hesitate to kill,she if she gets a lover she will respest them,doesn't mean she won't have fun with people until then.
She used to be a mage in an tower,she wanted ultimate power,she didn't think the consiqunces to this would be bad,so she found a demon that granted her wish she then became a demoness along with geting the power she is now a very powerful necromancer,she will not hesitate to fry anyone who mocks her power.